Week 2 Blog Reviews

Nicole:
I think Nicole did a really nice job on both blogs for last week. She used references from the text to help tie in her ideas to the facts presented to us and even used personal experiences in order to prove her point in the first blog. The only part of her writing I can honestly give constructive criticism to is her conclusion of both blogs. I was waiting for an overview of all her main points and just a wrap up of her writing, but instead I felt as if something was missing. The facts, commentary, and personal additives make her ideas and points very strong; she’s just missing the over-the-top ending. Nice Work Nicole =)

Victoria:
Victoria had some really great points for both topics this week. She too was able to call upon past experiences and personal interactions in order to make her arguments stronger which really enhance her writing overall. She really lets the reader get to know her through the examples and words she uses which in itself is very impressive. Many writers struggle to find their voice while writing and Victoria has managed to achieve that. The constructive criticism I have for Victoria is to just proofread her posts before she submits them. There are a few small spelling and grammatical errors that distract from her main ideas. Just by making those small changes Victoria can continue to succeed. Good Job Victoria =)

Whitney:
Whitney did very well with last week’s blog subjects. She really had some great opinions and ideas for both topics which made for a very interesting read. For our “Good without God” discussion she brought up some really great points and was able tackle the subject from a different angle, which really made me view the question in an unusual way. My only suggestions would be to thoroughly read over her blog before submission. I think that would eliminate the minor grammatical and spelling errors, as well as to help her really organize her thoughts. Awesome Work Whitney =)

It was really exciting to read everyone’s blogs this week! It is really fun to see different point of views and writing styles. I cannot wait to read the work over this semester and see everyone’s writing improve. Great Job this week Ladies!